2014-12-06
Chop it! Cook it! Eat it!
The book is only two pages long well clearly it's one and a half pages long.
Why do you have barely any writing of a story in it?Why is it a story if you didn't actually write in it as a story?
How long did it take to write the whole entire thing,it must have taken about two,two and a half days maybe more just guessing?
When did you start writing,I'd guess about when you was young.How many books have you written so far because I'd like to read another one but with more pages?
The bit I liked was when you just added a bit of a story and the you went back off track.
Lucia
(age 7)